Some Feedback On My Solo, Wrote this for my technical metal band Options

[X-Ray]

Hey.
I wrote this solo for my technical metal band, for a song that I've written named fragile.

First of all, I'd really like some critic on it, what's good and what should be changed or replaced. Please bring your own ideas if you want And for bar 28 I just had no idea what to do, so please help me out there



Then I'd also be very happy if someone could help me with how I possibly could play bar 21. Now I do like this, but maybe there is a better way to do it:
-22------20--------18/-17-------17/-15-------15/-13---------------
------20---------------------15-----------13------------11--10-----
----------------19-----------------------------------------------------

4------4---4----3---2--(2)---1----3--(3)--1----3--(3)--1----1

4 = pinky, 3 = ring finger etc.

*edit* The bass track is horrible, help with making a decent backing would be wonderful!

Provided the solo for now in GP5 and GP4 format
Enjoy and thanks!
Kim

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This post has been edited by X-Ray: Jun 27 2008, 02:50 PM