Wallimann's Melodic Challenge, Composition Try |
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Wallimann's Melodic Challenge, Composition Try |
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May 17 2012, 04:28 PM |
Nice phrasing man! Your tone is very warm and nice to hear. The melodies are fresh and tasty, you did a great job.
All the best! -------------------- My lessons
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May 17 2012, 04:53 PM |
Thank you so much Gabriel. Coming from the master, I am really inspired.
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May 17 2012, 10:29 PM |
Great job!!
My only suggestions (since you asked...) -Be aware of the sustain/timing of the hammer on note. I think you could hit it just a bit harder/cleaner for slightly more sustain, and also wait just a bit longer to pull off of the note. I think it was just slightly off the beat/premature. -@ about 0:55 you take a very pentatonic ascending pattern. Perhaps explore just 1 diff note (I don't have my guitar out, but maybe look into minor pentatonic add6 scale?) to "spice it up"!! Again, it really is an awesome, clean take, with great melodic phrasing! Good luck! Walliman is the man! -------------------- Check out my awesome Nintendo Cover-band, EMULATOR!! http://www.reverbnation.com/emulator Now.....go practice!! |
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May 18 2012, 02:31 AM |
Thanks derper. Will explore your suggestions.
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May 18 2012, 05:16 PM |
Sounds really good! I like your tone and use of vibrato.
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May 19 2012, 06:40 AM |
Thank you DeGroot.
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May 20 2012, 07:23 PM |
Nice work Chandra! I really like your tone on this!
-------------------- I'd rather have a full Bottle in front of me than a full Frontal Lobotomy!!
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May 21 2012, 04:33 AM |
Thank you Sensible Jones.
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