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Jan 5 2007, 10:10 PM
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This is the first time I have ever wrote a song. I have tried many times and could never even get something to sound halfway right. I have no idea at all where these lyrics came from. Just for it to be my first song, I am happy. I could never even get a full verse written before.
For now... its my First Random Song... or... "Come Back Home" http://www.myspace.com/sanderstheband As you can tell.. this isn't professional quality.. and somewhat abstract(the song). This post has been edited by sanders4617: Jan 6 2007, 07:52 PM |
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Jan 6 2007, 12:48 AM
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Nice song.
Nice voice too Man I liked it -------------------- The Guitar may be the love of life.
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Jan 6 2007, 12:57 AM |
I really like. . . NO! i love it ! it makes me think of getting stoned when i was younger and letting my mind travell places i couldnt go.
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Jan 6 2007, 11:26 AM |
Great! Lots of feel to it... Some cool licks in it too!
Two great song contributions on one day! |
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Jan 6 2007, 12:46 PM |
Your no longer a beginner
You made it Your a pro Well done Great song by the way - really great. Thats good enough to hear everyday on the radio -------------------- its not easy
banging your head against some mad buggers wall. Variax 300. Pod XTL & Crate amp some of my recordings are here: http://homepage.ntlworld.com/petergb/ |
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Jan 6 2007, 07:46 PM
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Yeap, nice to see some multi-track work posted, nice tune thats for sure, good vocals too!
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Jan 7 2007, 01:24 AM
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dam that was good man. I loved it, i'd say thats definitly radio material.
good job man and keep it up |
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Jan 8 2007, 11:02 PM
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I added a cover of a John Mayer song. I didn't really do much with spicing it up or anything.. just the acoustic and me... with some messups at the end, which I don't have down yet (learned it yesterday). Please critique if you may.. mostly the voice. Its a quiet song.. sort of like the title. =D
http://www.myspace.com/sanderstheband This post has been edited by sanders4617: Jan 8 2007, 11:07 PM |
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Feb 20 2007, 02:39 AM |
This is the first time I have ever wrote a song. I have tried many times and could never even get something to sound halfway right. I have no idea at all where these lyrics came from. Just for it to be my first song, I am happy. I could never even get a full verse written before. For now... its my First Random Song... or... "Come Back Home" http://www.myspace.com/sanderstheband As you can tell.. this isn't professional quality.. and somewhat abstract(the song). I liked it a lot - I can't fault the song, some great ideas in there and a nice acoustic style. With a little more care on the recording and production side it could go far! -------------------- Check out my Instructor profile
Live long and prosper ... My Stuff: Electric Guitars : Ibanez Jem7v, Line6 Variax 700, Fender Plus Strat with 57/62 Pickups, Line6 Variax 705 Bass Acoustic Guitars : Taylor 816ce, Martin D-15, Line6 Variax Acoustic 300 Nylon Effects : Line6 Helix, Keeley Modded Boss DS1, Keeley Modded Boss BD2, Keeley 4 knob compressor, Keeley OxBlood Amps : Epiphone Valve Jnr & Head, Cockburn A.C.1, Cockburn A.C.2, Blackstar Club 50 Head & 4x12 Cab |
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Feb 20 2007, 05:03 PM |
This was really cool.
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Mar 17 2007, 11:00 PM |
Loved it.
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Mar 25 2007, 05:24 PM |
wow awesome, thanks man, that was some inspiration for me:) im trying to finally get a song finished instead of 10000 riffs
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