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Oct 25 2009, 11:47 PM
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QUOTE (skennington @ Oct 25 2009, 07:16 PM)  Yes, it does! Love it  I also like the fact you can still here her accent a bit in the pronunciation. Well done guys!  Thank you Sken!
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Oct 26 2009, 03:49 AM
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WOW!!! this is really really good!! yeah certainly has an evanescence sound and feel to it. this song is every bit as good as anything on the radio today!!
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Oct 26 2009, 04:07 AM
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May I request "Muy Tarde" in English? Love this tune and would love it even more if I knew what you guys were saying..
 Awesome work!
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Oct 26 2009, 12:48 PM
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I love it. Exactly my taste in music. Everything sounds good together. and she has an amazing voice!
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Oct 26 2009, 04:46 PM
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QUOTE (skennington @ Oct 26 2009, 04:07 AM) May I request "Muy Tarde" in English? Love this tune and would love it even more if I knew what you guys were saying.. Awesome work! I totally agree! I love that song, it's just perfect. I already told Gabe once, if that song was aired on the radio over here it could easily be a major hit. At least it's a hit for me. Would love to hear it English, though the lyrics in Spanish are way too good and probably hard to translate keeping the feeling & message. Did I mention how great that tune is already??
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Oct 26 2009, 06:39 PM
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QUOTE (Fran @ Oct 26 2009, 12:46 PM) I totally agree! I love that song, it's just perfect. I already told Gabe once, if that song was aired on the radio over here it could easily be a major hit. At least it's a hit for me. Would love to hear it English, though the lyrics in Spanish are way too good and probably hard to translate keeping the feeling & message. Did I mention how great that tune is already?? Thank you Fran! We already have this lyric translated but as you suspect it's very difficult in this case to keep the feeling without losing the melody so it needs a little more work.
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Oct 26 2009, 06:47 PM
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Song lyrics, rather like poetry are often harder to translate then prose as they rely much more on metaphors and so on. I'm sure whoever did the translation has done a great job. My one suggestion is not to go for a verbatim translation, or even one that is in technically perfect grammar but one that conveys the meaning and the feeling
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Oct 26 2009, 10:56 PM
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QUOTE (tonymiro @ Oct 26 2009, 02:47 PM) Song lyrics, rather like poetry are often harder to translate then prose as they rely much more on metaphors and so on. I'm sure whoever did the translation has done a great job. My one suggestion is not to go for a verbatim translation, or even one that is in technically perfect grammar but one that conveys the meaning and the feeling .yes, tony. This really makes sense! Thank you for the suggestion! 
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I think the singing is very nice. Ofcourse Luciana can do some prefecting of here accent, but I think she does very good! For instance eastern European people often pronounce words like "song" like "songue" but that kind of mistakes are really not anywhere found in the song!|
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Nov 1 2009, 12:58 PM
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I hope this is a beginning of an international career!
Awesome Gab, song sounds great, and chorus is excellent! Production is really kicking nicely, very smooth track, and pleasant for listening, which is very important. It has a great flow to it. There are some places where I think pronunciation is a bit strange, but since I'm not native English speaker, take this with a pinch of salt. Here are my observations if it is OK: Come close to me, astonish me, be slow and quiet Come close to me, and always whisper in my ear. And tell me it is true. It is said that the unconscious is so endless [Reality] is everything that you set going I want to hear you... No one could get in, killing all my [distress] Leaving behind all my strong will, something will remain. Well now tell me what I should do, oh my free spirit Show me that place, that holy place, where we shall be together. No one could get in, killing all my distress Leaving behind all my strong will, something will remain. Why are you [unfair] to me, and leave me to be lost and lonely? Please talk to me, please give me your warm love. No one could get in, killing all my distress Leaving behind all my strong will, something will remain. This post has been edited by Ivan Milenkovic: Nov 1 2009, 01:00 PM -------------------- - Ivan's Video Chat Lesson Notes HERE
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Nov 1 2009, 05:31 PM
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QUOTE (Ivan Milenkovic @ Nov 1 2009, 08:58 AM) I hope this is a beginning of an international career! Awesome Gab, song sounds great, and chorus is excellent! Production is really kicking nicely, very smooth track, and pleasant for listening, which is very important. It has a great flow to it. There are some places where I think pronunciation is a bit strange, but since I'm not native English speaker, take this with a pinch of salt. Here are my observations if it is OK: Come close to me, astonish me, be slow and quiet Come close to me, and always whisper in my ear. And tell me it is true. It is said that the unconscious is so endless [Reality] is everything that you set going I want to hear you... No one could get in, killing all my [distress] Leaving behind all my strong will, something will remain. Well now tell me what I should do, oh my free spirit Show me that place, that holy place, where we shall be together. No one could get in, killing all my distress Leaving behind all my strong will, something will remain. Why are you [unfair] to me, and leave me to be lost and lonely? Please talk to me, please give me your warm love. No one could get in, killing all my distress Leaving behind all my strong will, something will remain. Great!! Thanks a lot for the nice comments and for the observations Ivan! This really helps us!
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Nov 11 2009, 02:53 PM
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QUOTE (rokchik @ Nov 1 2009, 07:23 PM) I think this is important suggestion, as like you said Gabriel, it is hard to translate but still keep the melody and feel of the original song. But even with that being said, I think you guys rocked this one!!!! I loved the original, and I must apologize for my complete butchering of your beautiful language in my car as I drive to work. I might not have a clue of what you are singing about, or how to properly pronounce it, but I still tried to sing along Now I really can sing along... much to the chagrin of my passengers I'm sure You guys know I'm a huge fan so now that I can also understand what you are writing it is very exciting.Luci's voice is amazing, but singing in english I think she has that extra little something. Very exotic and refreshing. I can't wait to hear more. No matter how you translate it.... CIRSE ROCKS!!!!!! Hey Rok!! Thanks a lot for your nice feedback! I hope we have enough time to record all the new material in both languages to let people from everywhere understand our lyrics! I would love to be in your head to notice the "exotic" feeling in Luciana's singing.... cheers! -------------------- My lessons
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Nov 11 2009, 03:46 PM
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QUOTE (rokchik @ Nov 11 2009, 11:15 AM) Being in my head can be kind of scary sometimes... ok most of the time ok,,, just when you are listening to Cirse!
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