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Vulpine
post May 9 2013, 06:43 PM
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hey guys I gotta run so I cant stay and chat but this is my new song I composed hope you liked

https://soundcloud.com/vulpinetekneq/what-more-do-you-want
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Jouve
post May 9 2013, 07:22 PM
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I like it, your sound is very good, and musical ideas are very stylish.I guess it's inspired by Satriani.

But i think you should work a little bit on that song. You seem to be rhythmically uncertain in some places.
Overall it's awesome wink.gif

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Cosmin Lupu
post May 10 2013, 08:46 AM
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Hey buddy!

I can hear improvements on the timing and rhythm parts - very good. In the lead sections there are moments of rhythmic uncertainty, but this may come from two directions:

- you were improvising and wasn't sure where to go next
- you haven't practiced your composition enough before recording

Which one is the right one? biggrin.gif

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post May 10 2013, 10:13 AM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ May 10 2013, 07:46 AM) *
Hey buddy!

I can hear improvements on the timing and rhythm parts - very good. In the lead sections there are moments of rhythmic uncertainty, but this may come from two directions:

- you were improvising and wasn't sure where to go next
- you haven't practiced your composition enough before recording

Which one is the right one? biggrin.gif

Cosmin



Hey Cosmin

I was improvising a solo and there was a lead line that was improvised that was influenced by some pedal tone licks that i've learned but as I was playing them I wasnt sure where to go

This however can be fixed by doing a redo and listening to the rhythm section thats playing underneath and try to come up with a nice refreshing solo phrase to end that section of the lead = ) but Cosmin you and Jouve I want to say thanks for listening and posting feed
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post May 10 2013, 10:30 AM
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Well, you know what to do wink.gif I am waiting for the final result, ok?


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post May 10 2013, 02:14 PM
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Hey Vulpine! I enjoyed listening to this song as always. It's a good composition, I like the progression and the different moments. I think that you have to define rhythms to make the timing more precise. That's the only improvement that I would do to this one.
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