Gary Moore Tribute Collaboration, Instructors/Students Video Collaboration |
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Mar 28 2014, 06:47 PM
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QUOTE (Darius Wave @ Mar 28 2014, 12:29 PM)  Wel well. Neil is highly inspired those days  Now that was nice Ricky!  I like You sense of melody. Only tip I could give here is Your take lacks a bit of colors. You ae able to create very touching melodies but You could sepnd some more time on polishing them. There are a lot of tools available1. different vibrato speed and depth 2. Bend and prebens have a few different aproaches - different tempo, different rhythm of bending for example 3. Slides 4. Different picking strength All those things add colos, important details that are hidden but makes the solo sound pros. If You have andy free time maybe You could add some extra flavour to You take? The melody is very good. It's not about changing notes. It's only about addin much more details to it 'In blues it's not the numebr of the notes but the magic of articulation and dynamics which makes it so emotional and full of flavour Anyway well done Very nice take Darius is right! And I think that your tone and note choice resemble Santana a lot! Which of course is a good thing Keep Darius' suggestions in mind and I am sure you can really make this piece shine!QUOTE (Sensible Jones @ Mar 27 2014, 09:08 PM) I wouldn't say I'm enjoying this one any more than the others but I've had a little more time to work on it than usual so, as you say, I've been able to be a bit more methodical. Also, on the others I didn't share my sketch takes to start with so I've enjoyed the feedback that that has brought. And now I present the Sensible Slow One:- https://soundcloud.com/neilwaller/gary-moore-sad-final-take Hey Neil - I am glad you are finding the time to work on things man Now, in the second half, things are a bit too static - alternating the note lengths should make a great difference, so my suggestion is to experiment with that idea and see what you get 
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Mar 29 2014, 09:19 AM
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hey guys, this was fun and whipped up something simple, but emotional. i know it's cutting it close to the deadline, but let me know if its is good enough or what not, and i'll tinker with it if need be. cheers
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garymooreminorcollab.mov ( 14.59MB )
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collab5_slow_90bpm.wav ( 6.73MB )
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gary_moore_collab_minor.mp3 ( 724.82K )
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Mar 29 2014, 10:03 AM
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QUOTE (Jeroen @ Mar 24 2014, 02:45 PM) Ok, I tried something new for the middle part of my Gary Moore Tribute. It´s still not exactly the way I want it. Although the opening lick is going to stay! https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-der-put/gmc-gary-moore-tribute-take3 I'm no instructor but i do like the beginning and end of your take qute a bit. That opening lick is really nice lol, and going back to fewer notes at the end is a good way to finish up. Tinker with the middle a little and your golden. QUOTE (Caelumamittendum @ Mar 25 2014, 08:36 PM) Some constructive criticism? TURN ON A LIGHT!!!!!! Seriously tho your take is very nice. I'm just starting to explore outside/chromatic notes, and your licks are what i want my licks to sound like soon lol.
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Mar 29 2014, 05:13 PM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Mar 29 2014, 03:55 PM) Hey mate! I like the idea very much and the vibrato around 0:26 is very Michael Lee Firkins'ish - I'm a fan Towards the end tho, there's a tendency to barely reach the intended pitch so that's what I'd work on Thanks cosmin. Never heard of this Michael Lee character... going to youtube him up lol. Do you mean at the end of the solo my bends are off pitch, or do you mean consistently at the end of my bends i'm missing the mark? QUOTE (capasso2 @ Mar 29 2014, 04:06 PM) Thanks cosmin. Never heard of this Michael Lee character... going to youtube him up lol. Do you mean at the end of the solo my bends are off pitch, or do you mean consistently at the end of my bends i'm missing the mark? You all heard it here first lol, Cosmin said i sound like this guy hahaha. I wish. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bIGqcCADE44 |
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Mar 29 2014, 08:31 PM
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I worked on it and this is pretty much the way I want it to be
https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-der-put/gmc-gary-moore-tribute4 Let me know what you think of it -------------------- My Youtube channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/SparrowLesPaul
Download my music for free: http://jeroenvanderput.bandcamp.com/album/...tal-heavy-metal Listen to my first mini album "Victory" on Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-der-put/s...tory-mini-album My facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/JeroenOnFire |
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Mar 30 2014, 08:44 PM
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QUOTE (capasso2 @ Mar 29 2014, 04:13 PM) Thanks cosmin. Never heard of this Michael Lee character... going to youtube him up lol. Do you mean at the end of the solo my bends are off pitch, or do you mean consistently at the end of my bends i'm missing the mark? You all heard it here first lol, Cosmin said i sound like this guy hahaha. I wish. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bIGqcCADE44 Some of your bends had that sweet vibrato that MLF has He is one of my favorite players, so that you know!QUOTE (Jeroen @ Mar 29 2014, 07:31 PM) I worked on it and this is pretty much the way I want it to be https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-der-put/gmc-gary-moore-tribute4 Let me know what you think of it Hey mate I think that it sounds nice, but I would put a little bit more rhythm behind the part around 0:18 - that one is not as definite as it could be QUOTE (Sensible Jones @ Mar 29 2014, 09:23 PM) OK Cos, I'll try changing the 2nd part a little bit and see what happens!! Cool mate! Stay in good timing and groove and put a whole lotta feeling into it
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Mar 30 2014, 10:00 PM
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Ok guys here is my second take. I try to implement a lot of different things in it. Hope you guys like it.
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/oxnt31ko35xkhch/C_m15FVG-P https://soundcloud.com/rickynine/garymoorecolabtake2-mp3 -------------------- My Youtube Channel:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCcTCgsVeHzITMZuI-cZXJZA My SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/rickynine |
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Mar 31 2014, 02:04 AM
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Here is what I think is my final take and video:
I have also included tabs for the solo in case anyone should be curious.
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Moore_solo_without_backing.mp3 ( 958.08K )
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Solo.gp5 ( 5.39K )
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Mar 31 2014, 08:50 AM
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QUOTE (Ricky9 @ Mar 30 2014, 10:00 PM) Ok guys here is my second take. I try to implement a lot of different things in it. Hope you guys like it. https://www.dropbox.com/sh/oxnt31ko35xkhch/C_m15FVG-P https://soundcloud.com/rickynine/garymoorecolabtake2-mp3 Nice one Ricky QUOTE (Caelumamittendum @ Mar 31 2014, 02:04 AM) Here is what I think is my final take and video: I have also included tabs for the solo in case anyone should be curious. Hi Capt Cael, I like it a lot, very nice playing. I trust on my ears and it sounds very good
-------------------- My Youtube channel: https://www.youtube.com/user/SparrowLesPaul
Download my music for free: http://jeroenvanderput.bandcamp.com/album/...tal-heavy-metal Listen to my first mini album "Victory" on Soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-der-put/s...tory-mini-album My facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/JeroenOnFire |
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Mar 31 2014, 01:15 PM
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QUOTE (capasso2 @ Mar 29 2014, 09:19 AM) hey guys, this was fun and whipped up something simple, but emotional. i know it's cutting it close to the deadline, but let me know if its is good enough or what not, and i'll tinker with it if need be. cheers Nice one mate Don't be so shy You could give a few more dB's of solo volume I'll fix this in a final mix QUOTE (Jeroen @ Mar 29 2014, 08:31 PM) I worked on it and this is pretty much the way I want it to be https://soundcloud.com/jeroen-van-der-put/gmc-gary-moore-tribute4 Let me know what you think of it this sounds good - it's consistent and well glued Well done QUOTE (Ricky9 @ Mar 30 2014, 10:00 PM) Ok guys here is my second take. I try to implement a lot of different things in it. Hope you guys like it. https://www.dropbox.com/sh/oxnt31ko35xkhch/C_m15FVG-P https://soundcloud.com/rickynine/garymoorecolabtake2-mp3 Well Ricky...aside form one bend that is screwed it's a beautiful thing! Awesome work! Love the dynamics and those colors You brought in this take. Really good job! |
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Mar 31 2014, 04:10 PM
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QUOTE (Caelumamittendum @ Mar 30 2014, 09:04 PM) Here is what I think is my final take and video: I have also included tabs for the solo in case anyone should be curious. Very nice take Cael!! And thanks to the instructors for your comments and support. -------------------- My Youtube Channel:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCcTCgsVeHzITMZuI-cZXJZA My SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/rickynine |
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Mar 31 2014, 04:14 PM
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QUOTE (Ricky9 @ Mar 30 2014, 09:00 PM) Ok guys here is my second take. I try to implement a lot of different things in it. Hope you guys like it. https://www.dropbox.com/sh/oxnt31ko35xkhch/C_m15FVG-P https://soundcloud.com/rickynine/garymoorecolabtake2-mp3 Hey Ricky, I like your take! I think that the only thing you should pay a bit more attention to, would be bends such as the one around 0:34 which is a bit under the pitch
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Apr 2 2014, 09:18 PM
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QUOTE (Caelumamittendum @ Mar 30 2014, 10:04 PM) Here is what I think is my final take and video: I have also included tabs for the solo in case anyone should be curious. Killer solo Cael! I really like it. It has a good balance between melodies and faster licks and the tone fits great! Good job! QUOTE (Ricky9 @ Mar 30 2014, 06:00 PM) Ok guys here is my second take. I try to implement a lot of different things in it. Hope you guys like it. https://www.dropbox.com/sh/oxnt31ko35xkhch/C_m15FVG-P https://soundcloud.com/rickynine/garymoorecolabtake2-mp3 Nice solo mate. I like the feeling of your take which fits great with dynamics and tone used. There are 1 or 2 bends a bit out of pitch but we will do something to improve it in the mix. Thanks! -------------------- My lessons
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