The Soulful Ballad Collab, Instructors/Students Video Collaboration |
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Sep 22 2014, 01:32 PM
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Thanks a lot for your encouragements Cosmin!
I'm on it and I will continue to improve the takes till the deadline; |
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Sep 22 2014, 01:38 PM
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Hi Rhida! I gave you feedback about the new take at Gab's Army. Please follow Cosmin's details because he marked very important details to fix that are a good way to start polishing the take. My comments are related to tone, pitch and bending technique. Please check them out and tell me if you have some more questions.
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Sep 23 2014, 02:31 PM
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Hey guys!! Who else is working on this one??
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Sep 24 2014, 04:38 PM
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Indeed - who else is at this? There's plenty of time available, but you know how fast it flies
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Sep 24 2014, 11:50 PM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Sep 24 2014, 08:38 AM)  Indeed - who else is at this? There's plenty of time available, but you know how fast it flies I plan on submitting a take. -------------------- The more I practice, the more I wish I had time to practice!
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Sep 25 2014, 05:41 PM
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Excellent, Jams! I'll sign ya up!
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Sep 26 2014, 04:01 AM
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I'm getting a little closer. I left my headphones at home so I can't send guitar tracks cause they have the sound track artifacts in them, but here's my idea for the first 3/4 of the song. i'll work on the rest over the weekend.
This was challenging coming up with a second solo - I came up with 5 different versions ... this one will do I think. Timing is a bit iffy and I hit 2 wrong notes on the end of a scale - but I'll fix those. https://soundcloud.com/sirjamsalot/sirjamsalot-001 This post has been edited by SirJamsalot: Sep 26 2014, 08:37 AM -------------------- The more I practice, the more I wish I had time to practice!
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Sep 26 2014, 03:51 PM
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Hi Sir! Thanks for joining this one! I really like your solo. It starts VERY good. You created some very tasty phrases there, I like the double string ideas as well as the way you managed silence between phrases. That let's your playing breath. I can say that the first half is excellent. The second part, starting at 00:30 is ok, but I think that you could work a bit more those melodies to make it sound even cooler. And off course fix those weird notes that you marked.
Once you improved those details, if you re-record this take, put more emphasis on dynamics, timing and vibrato. Keep on rocking.
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Sep 26 2014, 08:45 PM
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QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Sep 26 2014, 10:06 AM) I'm with Gabi on this one From second 0:30 onwards, it seems like you moved the state of mind a bit too abruptly, so if you are to ask me, you should created a much smoother passage and phrasing for the second part. The first one is very, very nice and I have already listened to it 2-3 times so far Keep rocking and show us the next version, mate Okay, I'll tone down a bit. I was trying to move the mood forward because I like progressions in mood, but that was probably a bit too caustic. I'll rewrite the second passage. The funny thing is I spent about 2 hours coming up with the notes and phrasing for that solo - then recorded it without really practicing it, so it's rough, but I think with some practice I can smooth it out - I'll make personal version for myself to ponder Thank for the feedback guys! Chris! -------------------- The more I practice, the more I wish I had time to practice!
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Sep 27 2014, 02:54 PM
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Here is my contribution to this collab
Only guitar: https://soundcloud.com/thomas-heino/only-guitar-collab-ballad Guitar and backing: https://soundcloud.com/thomas-heino/the-soulful-ballad-collab And the video:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7vPQttKAtFE&feature=youtu.be This post has been edited by Nava: Sep 27 2014, 03:00 PM -------------------- If it sounds good, it IS good! And if you think its good then there is gonna be someone else in the world that thinks its good:)Wise words from former instructor Marcus Lavendell.
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Sep 27 2014, 08:18 PM
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QUOTE (SirJamsalot @ Sep 26 2014, 07:45 PM) Okay, I'll tone down a bit. I was trying to move the mood forward because I like progressions in mood, but that was probably a bit too caustic. I'll rewrite the second passage. The funny thing is I spent about 2 hours coming up with the notes and phrasing for that solo - then recorded it without really practicing it, so it's rough, but I think with some practice I can smooth it out - I'll make personal version for myself to ponder Thank for the feedback guys! Chris! Always a pleasure matey Sometimes, some ideas we find may fit in a different situation than the one we initially mean to use them for, so that's why it's good to stash them up in a database. This is a way in which I came up with a lot of the GMC lessons in the past - I had a lot of ideas which weren't used for anything and I used them to develop the lessons. But let's see how your solo goes - the first part, I must confess I listened to it a bit even now QUOTE (Nava @ Sep 27 2014, 01:54 PM) Here is my contribution to this collab Only guitar: https://soundcloud.com/thomas-heino/only-guitar-collab-ballad Guitar and backing: https://soundcloud.com/thomas-heino/the-soulful-ballad-collab And the video:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7vPQttKAtFE&feature=youtu.be Hey Nava! Thank you for the files! The playing is great and the ideas too and I think that aside that alternate picking lick which could've benefited a little bit more work so that it may have sounded cleaner, everything is very nice! Glad to have you in, mate! |
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Sep 28 2014, 02:29 PM
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here's my efforts
--------------------  You say 'minor pentatonic ' like it's a bad thing |
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Sep 28 2014, 11:02 PM
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QUOTE (Nava @ Sep 27 2014, 10:54 AM) Here is my contribution to this collab Only guitar: https://soundcloud.com/thomas-heino/only-guitar-collab-ballad Guitar and backing: https://soundcloud.com/thomas-heino/the-soulful-ballad-collab And the video:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7vPQttKAtFE&feature=youtu.be Hi Nava! Thanks for your take for this one! I like your tone and all the melodic phrases that your provided on this one. It's a pity that the faster lick is not totally polished. It's the only detail that needs some work, the other parts are brilliant. Thanks!! QUOTE (bleez @ Sep 28 2014, 10:29 AM) here's my efforts Wou! This is a very tasty take man. I enjoyed listening to the whole thing. Thanks a lot for this killer entry.
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Sep 29 2014, 06:30 AM
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QUOTE (bleez @ Sep 28 2014, 01:29 PM) Awesome take Bleez, I enjoyed listening!!! |
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Sep 29 2014, 08:12 AM
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thank you kindly folks
very much appreciated.
-------------------- You say 'minor pentatonic ' like it's a bad thing |
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