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Take 2: Your first Rock Ballad, Lesson By Gabriel Leopardi
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Gert1973
Nov 10 2022, 02:57 PM
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From: Antwerp, Belgium
Original lesson: Your first Rock Ballad by Gabriel Leopardi

Retake for better sound quality. @Kris and Monica: I looked at the video of Kris and here I already found my ancher point, I think. I had it before but I guess I'm struggling with my recording tools. I changed my position so you can see my guitar. And of course that's not a good thing. So I have to find/buy gear for better recording...



Links to previous attempts at this lesson:
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Monica Gheorghev...
Nov 10 2022, 06:09 PM
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Hi Gert!

First of all, try when you record a video to put the camera in such a way to catch both hands (like in your previous takes). It will help us to give you a better feedback.

Your right hand looks a little better but still needs some adjustments. Give yourself a little more time. Unfortunately, not many things can be fixed immediately, but with practice and patience, everything can be solved.

You are very focused on how you pick the strings and that's why this time you have some timing issues.

When you arpeggiate the chords, don't rush the last note. All your upstrokes don't look good. It's clear that you have some problems with the picking technique. That's why I would recommend this lesson to you:

https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/Picking-Hand-Basics/

Don't be scared because it's from level 2 of difficulty. I don't need you to play this lesson at the original tempo. I just want to help you fix your picking technique.
So, study this lesson at a slower tempo. You can record some takes and put them in the Practice Room. In this way, we can help you to fix the issues.
Increase the speed only when all the notes sounds good at lower tempo.

The strumming part doesn't sound clear enough. Don't forget to add a little more force when you strum.

Continue practicing this lesson more days and after you fix all the things that we pointed out, make a new recording. I will give you a 6 to encourage you.


Keep up the good work!

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Todd Simpson
Nov 11 2022, 02:53 AM
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Congrats on making so many vids as PRACTICE MAKES PERFECT! smile.gif The more vids you make, the more practice you get, the more feedback you take, the better you will get.

This one shows some improvement but you still need to change the things mentioned previously, which I think you can do smile.gif

One thing to try, you seem to be using the neck pickup, try using the middle position which will use both to give a bit more bite/treble to tone? It will brighten it up a bit. Also try that switching to classical position if possible.

6 from me onward!

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Kristofer Dahl
Nov 11 2022, 10:29 AM
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Awesome - your playing here is less 'mechanical' and it conveys a more musical impression.

You still need to work on all the things we have mentioned, but you display your command of all the concepts taught in the lesson.

Well done it's a 9 from me!

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Nov 28 2022, 01:13 PM
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