Sharing Some Of My Recent Poetry
Storm Linnebjerg
Feb 9 2023, 04:05 PM
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Joined: 14-June 08
From: Odense, Denmark
I've suddenly hit a vein of inspiration when it comes to words, so I've been writing a bit again. I wanted to share 4 pieces that I've read to some music.The songs are just royalty free music off of YouTube. Let me know what you think!









Written formats below.

I Was Here
Spoiler:
“I was here” (1st of January, 2023)

Copenhagen is strangely porous today.
The city embraces me in its well-oiled infrastructure.
The oblivious machine grabs hold of me,
chews on my ragged brain,
then spits me out again.
I plummet endlessly through the all too-familiar surroundings;
crumbling buildings with mundane masonry or eclectic architecture
(that house nothing but hollow human husks);
and I fall
from who I was sure I had become these days
back to a time littered with stories of a mythical potential for heroism;
one that never grew big enough to forge the bravery needed for me to conquer the world,
and through the bloody battles I only ever lost sight of the dreams that once built this fortress,
which now just accommodates the lonely tales of what-could-have-beens,
stories about forced compliance, the hope of many a you-can-do-it
and the battle cry of social workers:
"why don't you try again? You’re young and intelligent!".
The only possible outcome was me losing this war
and being left near death in the bloodshed of the battlefield.

Now I'm a veteran lost in the web of thoughts in my own head,
with a detrimental self-harmful taste
for wandering the endless trenches of unfinished projects and works
that just so happen to nourish the pitch-black void in my mind,
where inspiration must once have planted its sole seed.

The branches don’t grow in the obsidian gloom,
and I have yet to find a torch that can light these hallways
without igniting the fumes that drench the air with that illusive motivation;
the flames will always burn bright while they devour every word and sentence
over and over, again and again,
cliché-ridden and in a blaze of glory.
Silence and blackness eclipses the blissful radiance
and history repeats
ad nauseam.

The valkyries have long since abandoned me,
yet I keep meandering these corridors in stygian solitude,
and while the pages are too often left blank, voiceless and mute,
they still hungrily howl for affection.

Perhaps I should just write graffiti on a wall somewhere in the city:
“I was here!”
That's quite a lot easier than making an impact on the world.


The Diet of Muses: A Misread Recipe

Spoiler:
The Diet of Muses: A Misread Recipe (30th of January, 2023)

I have force-fed my brain mouthwatering inspiration for far too long;
7-course feasts with delightful phrases and exquisite expressions,
too many second dinners and too much indulging in desserts when already full.
I have stuffed my mind with honey glazed verbs and deep fried superlatives,
and it has become overweight and immobile,
unable to move through my pencil onto the impatient paper.
The graphite artery is always obstructed and clogged
with nothing pulsing through its restricted veins.

Even though the pen often glistens and shines;
from all the melted fat of the filthy steaks it has literally ingested,
served up with a side-dish of sugar coated truths falling on my deafened ears,
I kept swallowing whole my own false validation
that may just have been crummy excuses to write nothing at all.
I never stopped to wonder what the diet of Muses even consists of.
It seems I am not half as well-read as I am mis-read.

I have been perverse with my inspiration for far too long;
pig-sized portions instead of healthy nonsense and word-salad.
I miss being 5 years old, and I miss Barney and Friends.


Follow the Goddamn Rabbit

Spoiler:
FOLLOW THE GODDAMN RABBIT
(6th of February, 2023)

I am curious by nature,
and I've wanted to dive into every rabbit hole that I've come across,
but I am not sure I would fit anymore.

I've been told curiosity kills cats,
and I have already spent eight of my lives waiting to dive in,
so how could I risk my ninth and final one?

Eagerness easily turns reckless,
so I better carefully weigh up my options to find the one that fits,
and hope the moment doesn't pass me by.

So, Wonderland can wait another day;
the White Rabbit is way too disorganized, and it's better I just pretend to not be home
if he comes knocking on my door.

Yes! Instead I should sit and ponder in silence,
let my thoughts bounce against the off-white walls and their monotony,
and maybe later I can reminisce my long lost naivety.

"This is life at its best!" they say, and I'm almost sure of it too,
so I measure up my premises, and I perimeter in my wanderlust to these boundaries,
and plant my flag in this soil where only venom could ever grow.

I fill the rabbit holes in my backyard with concrete and cement,
and fake a smile to the sound of suburban cars and sticky new tarmac;
Yes, let my legacy be that of lifeless outdoor tiles!

Urgh! It sticks to my feet and I don't like it at all!
The sound rubs itself against the walls of my mind, tunnels through my cranium,
and lets my psyche out, so it can growl at this counterfeit me.

"This is living, isn't it?" they say, but I'm not quite so sure of it;
If so, perhaps I should question my sanity more often,
and just follow the White Rabbit down his rabbit hole.

It seems I've buried my childlike sense of wonder beneath mortgages and equity,
commonplace customaries and stale conversations about capital,
and I've grown to be mundane and characterless.

I should have invested in myself instead of brick and mortar.



A Mind in Deterioration:
Thoughts on the Balance between Emptiness and the Ingenuity of Solemn Strongholds


Spoiler:

A Mind in Deterioration:
Thoughts on the Balance between Emptiness and the Ingenuity of Solemn Strongholds.

Emptiness can be such an unrelenting force;
I do not understand how it can grow so vigorously and with such hardened determination
on the dull and low-calorie diet of vacuums and hollows;
so I often wonder if I should trust this growing intangible chasm,
seducing me in its comforting embrace of little to no outside impressions or stimulus,
while it can somehow still find nutrition in my isolation.

However, I like the endlessly resonating echoes of all my unspoken thoughts
reverberating and reflecting on the walls of these abandoned foyers and vacant chambers
as their thunderous ringing occupies my otherwise pointless intellect.

My own knowledge is power in this place,
and though knowledge can grow stale with negligence,
leading corrosion and rot to the wooden framework and dream-carrying pipes within my dreamscape,
I find it to have unlimited significance here,
where the confines of my mind have infinite dimensions
that hold immeasurable amounts of meaning
without ever overflowing these non-existent bounds of my castle in the sky.

…and so my ethereal exile rarely grows heavy or cumbersome,
In fact, just quite the opposite; it lessens in mass by every dream that unfolds,
and hovers ever higher in delicate fashion with graceful ease.

Yet the passage to this imaginary realm is a string tied to the back of my head,
invisible to most other people, hidden in the curly locks and wavy strands of my hair,
and I fear that one day the string will snap
under the strain of all the social constructs, norms and expectations weighing me down.

If I could no longer visit my hallowed sanctuary,
and If I could no longer hear the enchanting psalms echo through the corridors and hallways,
then the emptiness I fear the most would forever outweigh the ingenuity of my solemn stronghold.

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