Seas Of Forever
Storm Linnebjerg
Jun 15 2008, 05:20 PM
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Some time back I started writing some lyrics, which I unfortunately never went on with. I might write a few more lines to it one of these days - maybe make it an intro to a concept album-ish thing.

SEAS OF FOREVER

From candlelights stem upside-down fountains of smoke
Their rendezvous unveils a dimmed ocean
As the flames set the sky ablaze in red shades
The hazy waters confirm your notion

Now you are sailing the seas of forever
You see horizons waver before your eyes
Dreary in their loom - you hold your terror at bay
But this voyage is never-ending

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Jun 15 2008, 07:03 PM
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Hey Cael., That was really good smile.gif

Has the potential to be a really nice song biggrin.gif

You should start writing more and posting on the board you have amazing potential smile.gif

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Bogdan Radovic
Jun 15 2008, 08:14 PM
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You should definitly continue with these lyrics..Maybe fine tune them later on to fit a song.. wink.gif

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Jun 15 2008, 09:38 PM
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Definitely add to this, Lots of potential smile.gif

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Ivan Milenkovic
Jun 17 2008, 12:02 AM
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Very nice poetry and choice of words man smile.gif

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Jun 17 2008, 12:06 AM
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im speechless that was great

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Storm Linnebjerg
Jun 17 2008, 12:47 AM
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Woah, man! Thanks for the kind words on this. I'll definately try to go on with this :-)

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Canis
Apr 28 2009, 07:05 PM
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I love it ^^
You should definetly keep going with this!

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Ivan Milenkovic
Apr 28 2009, 07:11 PM
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I say definitely try to develop this style, it's great! smile.gif Some song would be awesome as well!

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