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Siggum
Feb 12 2009, 03:18 PM
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Heya, been trying to make something out of this riff i came up with some time ago, so experimenting with some chord progressions, tell me what ya think.

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Bogdan Radovic
Feb 12 2009, 03:23 PM
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First two parts are perfect!! Third one is not so convincing....This sounds like a great acoustic tune and I would love to hear some singing over it!! Good job on developing the riff into a song..

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Feb 12 2009, 03:31 PM
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Hehe thanks Bodgan biggrin.gif yeah i dont think that last part should be in the song, thanks for the tip smile.gif

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Ramiro Delforte
Feb 13 2009, 05:01 AM
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I think the first part could function as a Intro, the second one I think it's not good as a verse but could be the bridge. I think the two first parts don't funcion one following the next because there are almost the same chords I think the verse could be somewhere else and then return (in the bridge) to that same harmonic field smile.gif

The third part could be in the song but I think you'll find it hard to connect it with the other two parts, you'll have to do a serious thinking about the work that will give you to match those things or just put it into the jar of ideas for other song.

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Feb 13 2009, 01:04 PM
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QUOTE (Ramiro Delforte @ Feb 13 2009, 05:01 AM) *
I think the first part could function as a Intro, the second one I think it's not good as a verse but could be the bridge. I think the two first parts don't funcion one following the next because there are almost the same chords I think the verse could be somewhere else and then return (in the bridge) to that same harmonic field smile.gif

The third part could be in the song but I think you'll find it hard to connect it with the other two parts, you'll have to do a serious thinking about the work that will give you to match those things or just put it into the jar of ideas for other song.


Thanks for the feedbac Ramiro, i mostly agree with you actually the second one would work better as a brigde, also because it loses the effect if you repeat it multiple times i think biggrin.gif I'm gonna work som more on this and perhabs upload a new version.

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