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Jan 5 2012, 11:23 PM
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Hey welcome to GMC!
 Great to see that you can record videos, shall we see some REC lesson takes from you? I like your solo here. It is very nicely composed and fits the backing track well. What I would suggest is to try to make it more diverse when it comes to phrasing that concerns note duration. For example you want to try to mix in different lengths of notes to make a phrase interesting. You wouldn't want long passages of for example successive 8th notes. Try to break those phrases into for example one 8th note followed by two 16th notes instead of another 8th note. Check out these lessons that deal with syncopation to get some ideas. Vibrato needs some work to make those long notes sing. Ben's Vibrato lessons series is great for this : https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/lessonser...ibrato-Odyssey/ Keep rocking and see you in the forum!
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Jan 5 2012, 11:36 PM
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Wow, excellent solo, I like it a lot
I like that synth sound, it reminds me of old games it's great. Well, I think phrasing and structure is quite good. You should work more on your bending and vibrato techniques to make it sounds more expressive, but this is great
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Jan 6 2012, 06:36 AM
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hey man! Welcome to the site! That's a cool video! I like your solo. Everything sounds good over the backing. As the other instructors said, more variety in the rhythm of your phrases will make your solo even more interesting. I also think that your vibrato technique could be improved!
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Jan 6 2012, 02:54 PM
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Hey my friend, welcome ! I would definitely look at Bogdan's advice as it is what I would also have suggested
I made a lesson that deals with varying note values to help create variety in a solo. You don't necessarily need to learn it but you might be able to pick up some ideas from it https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/Set-The-Pace/ |
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Jan 6 2012, 06:25 PM
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Cheers mate
Looking forward in hearing some more music from you
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