The Feelings Collab, ...get the emotions out! |
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The Feelings Collab, ...get the emotions out! |
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Jun 11 2015, 11:21 AM |
Hey GMC'ers!
I'm happy to bring you a new collab and this one is all about the feelings! Let the rain or sun influence your mood when playing your take, anything goes here. Get angry, sad, happy - let the backing track move you. The track was made by Javier Aviles and is taken from this lesson. BACKING TRACK: Feelings_Collab_85_bpm.mp3 ( 2.33MB ) Number of downloads: 1084 Jam Track for practicing: Jam_Track_85_bpm.mp3 ( 10.59MB ) Number of downloads: 947 Tempo: 85 bpm Progression: Bb | Cm | Cm | Eb Bb | Fm | Ab | Eb x3 Eb | Bb | Cm Needed: melodic lead lines and solos! ________ When you decide on your final take, please submit two audio files: 1. Your solo without the backing track. 2. Your solo mixed with the backing track for reference. Please feel free to let me know if this is your first collab and if you need more info on how these work and how to produce the needed files, I'll be glad to help you out! Deadline: 15th of July Who is up for it? Participants: fzalfa, Kristofer Dahl, bleez, Phil66, Chris S, Opetholic, Jim S, Ricky9, Marek Rojewski, Nick6373, Piotr Kaczor..... -------------------- For GMC support please email support (at) guitarmasterclass.net
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Jun 11 2015, 11:22 PM |
Hey Laurent - great to hear you jamming already. It is very good that you are making recordings of your jams as it will help you to compose a "super take" out of the cool ideas which came out spontaneously.
I have listened to both of your takes and here are my impressions based on one listen each so it should be as objective in terms of what grabs my ear as possible: Take 2 (polished take): 0:11-0:20 - this is a very nice melody and its catchy, with emotion etc. I liked it phrasing and note choice wise. Thing to pay attention to: note you slide to at approx 0:17! This is the best note in this phrase hands on, its just full of feelings and perfectly lines up with the backing chord. I would use this note and whole section as a base for my take if I were you. You'll notice that you quickly go from the long note at 0:17 (which is IMO "the note"). Try to make that note longer and more sustained and then make a small pause before going for more licks/phrasing. This will evoke more dramatic emotional effect. In this seciton you should polish up on all the expressive elements so be careful with how clean each note sounds and also how fast/slow you slide to and from notes as well as possible hammer-ons and pull-offs usage. It needs to be gentle and smooth for the highest effect on the listener. Take 1: 1:56-2:16 - this is the best section from this take in my opinion. Harmonics, melody and note choice is pretty strong here. Things to look out for here would be to play notes and keep them sustained for longer so that you can smoothly go from one note to the next one without the previous one "dying" in terms of sustain. Those sections above are ones I'd "buy" from these jam takes and use them as source for creating a super take which needs to be short, composed and well played. My suggestion would be to start composing a short take using those section above as starting point and main theme/idea. Once you have it composed and it sounds/feels good against the backing track you can work on the actual technical performance and polishing it up. Tone wise, my suggestion would be to add a bit more warmth to your tone. Try rolling down the treble and gain a bit and maybe increasing bass and mid frequencies. I think that tone like this one for example would really fit the backing well: https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/Dire-Straits-Inspired/ Looking forward to what you come up with -------------------- For GMC support please email support (at) guitarmasterclass.net
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