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Feb 24 2008, 12:37 AM
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What's up Kyle,
Hav'nt even listened to the upload but sur its great as i've listened to some of your others. If you hav'nt already, I would seriously consider creating an artist profile here. http://www.reverbnation.com/ This site is awesome and has alot of really cool features that can connect you with fans. It monitors in real time how many hits and downloads you recieve. Also you can search out other bands of different genres in your area. Creat mp3 player to download your material for everyone to hear. You can even post that player in any URL. Steve Edit: Hey man, just had a listen and i think that was really good! I would recomend some backing vocals in the chorus and pump that sweet electric guitar up a little in your master mix! Great job. Take a demo to your local country music station and I bet it gets played. This post has been edited by skennington: Feb 24 2008, 12:44 AM |
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Feb 24 2008, 12:48 AM
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Very nice song here Kyle!! I really like the overall idea , vocals are cool! On the first listen here are my impressions :
bass line should be considered more, its not really in the groove with the drums (they sound apart from each other to me)..Line it self is ok , just move it a little in time ...best way is to hit all the bass drum beats at the same on bass and than go from there to other notes..Some turnarounds here and there would work cool too..I got a sense that you need another guitar other than acoustic there , especially in chorus to allow it to explode and not be flat with other verses etc  These are just personal impressions , song is good overall just needs some polishing
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Feb 24 2008, 02:43 AM
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Interesting song man, great effort! The idea is very nice, and the sound is decent. You must work on it off course, drum samples are too synthetic and sound looped, bass is weak, and guitars buzz a little. On the chorus you should insert another guitar or some pads in order to get some dynamics, this way sounds too flat.
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Feb 24 2008, 01:13 PM
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Good song, my friend !!! remember also our project
 I wish I had time enough for it !!!
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