Creativity Workout 1, Improve your composing skills! |
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May 21 2015, 12:20 AM
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hi
i replay with a too late train, i juste start to read the topic, but not entierely, it's late now, i think sleeping is requiered so about the sad pictures i have done two track , one shoot for each, full of errorsn faults , bad notes.... but it reflect a certain inner state in presence of these pictures and words.... (hohoho i listen too much dream theater, people who know maybe notices some words in my sentence) this is the first one, the end is out of the track, i do not understand... https://soundcloud.com/dizy-laurent/sad the next one is more metal, maybe a good riff, an idea beneath my head's skin. https://soundcloud.com/dizy-laurent/sad-metal it's time to go to bed 1.30 late at night Laurent --------------------    |
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May 21 2015, 01:12 PM
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I will give this workout a try
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May 22 2015, 07:52 PM
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QUOTE (fzalfa @ May 21 2015, 12:20 AM)  hi i replay with a too late train, i juste start to read the topic, but not entierely, it's late now, i think sleeping is requiered so about the sad pictures i have done two track , one shoot for each, full of errorsn faults , bad notes.... but it reflect a certain inner state in presence of these pictures and words.... (hohoho i listen too much dream theater, people who know maybe notices some words in my sentence) this is the first one, the end is out of the track, i do not understand... https://soundcloud.com/dizy-laurent/sad the next one is more metal, maybe a good riff, an idea beneath my head's skin. https://soundcloud.com/dizy-laurent/sad-metal it's time to go to bed 1.30 late at night Laurent Nice work Laurent  I like both pieces -------------------- SEE MY GMC CERTIFICATE  “Success is not obtained overnight. It comes in instalments; you get a little bit today, a little bit tomorrow until the whole package is given out. The day you procrastinate, you lose that day's success.” Israelmore Ayivor |
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May 22 2015, 07:55 PM
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QUOTE (fzalfa @ May 20 2015, 08:20 PM) hi i replay with a too late train, i juste start to read the topic, but not entierely, it's late now, i think sleeping is requiered so about the sad pictures i have done two track , one shoot for each, full of errorsn faults , bad notes.... but it reflect a certain inner state in presence of these pictures and words.... (hohoho i listen too much dream theater, people who know maybe notices some words in my sentence) this is the first one, the end is out of the track, i do not understand... https://soundcloud.com/dizy-laurent/sad the next one is more metal, maybe a good riff, an idea beneath my head's skin. https://soundcloud.com/dizy-laurent/sad-metal it's time to go to bed 1.30 late at night Laurent Hi Laurent! Thanks for joining this workout! I enjoyed listening to your music. This two compositions sound really good! Both are sad and related to the picture but each of them generates a different feeling on me. The first one is more introspective, it makes me feel things inside, while the second one sounds more like a soundtrack for me. Both are very tasty and enjoyable and what it's even more important both are deep. Are you used to compose this kind of music? These are VERY promising ideas. QUOTE (HiimAlex @ May 21 2015, 09:12 AM) I will give this workout a try Awesome! Looking forward your ideas! -------------------- My lessons
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May 26 2015, 04:03 PM
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Ok guys! This is the new photo for this workout. This time it's a happy photo.
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May 26 2015, 07:37 PM
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So many elements to this one, difficult to do a cinematic track, for me anyway
 Hopefully something will pop into my head soon.Cheers Gab -------------------- SEE MY GMC CERTIFICATE “Success is not obtained overnight. It comes in instalments; you get a little bit today, a little bit tomorrow until the whole package is given out. The day you procrastinate, you lose that day's success.” Israelmore Ayivor |
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May 26 2015, 09:02 PM
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Struggling with this one. Can't think of a melody. Here's what I have so far.
https://soundcloud.com/gmcphil-1/paradise-in-progress -------------------- SEE MY GMC CERTIFICATE “Success is not obtained overnight. It comes in instalments; you get a little bit today, a little bit tomorrow until the whole package is given out. The day you procrastinate, you lose that day's success.” Israelmore Ayivor |
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May 27 2015, 02:55 PM
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QUOTE (Phil66 @ May 26 2015, 05:02 PM) Struggling with this one. Can't think of a melody. Here's what I have so far. https://soundcloud.com/gmcphil-1/paradise-in-progress hehe you did it again! I really like the feeling of your track! and I also like the fact that you called "in progress" because I feel that it's lacking a flute melody to be perfect! don't you think so? You can take some inspiration from here: https://youtu.be/S5N2VPGWGZ4 https://youtu.be/erBTbeyJ3Mc QUOTE (fzalfa @ May 26 2015, 05:25 PM) licky guy !! i promise to my wife to do not play guitar tonight.......... arrggghhhhhhhh maybe i'll get up during da night to record my track Laurent hahaha did it happen? 
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May 27 2015, 03:22 PM
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QUOTE (fzalfa @ May 27 2015, 11:01 AM) in fact no, but i'm now on the way to do something..... between your exervices, the GMC collab and my friend Yann i have a lot to do !! Laurent heheh nice to know that all is full of music!
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May 27 2015, 03:38 PM
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this is a quick idea throw..... a small lick, i have record a whole track (7min) but not really clean in term of play, i do not reallt know this style of music, but it speak to me when i look the picture. excuse me for the false notes....... https://soundcloud.com/dizy-laurent/test-happy i return to work on my homework..... Laurent edit: i have listen it back again, and it's crappy...... i suck Laurent This post has been edited by fzalfa: May 28 2015, 06:51 AM -------------------- |
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May 27 2015, 08:07 PM
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QUOTE (Gabriel Leopardi @ May 27 2015, 02:55 PM) hehe you did it again! I really like the feeling of your track! and I also like the fact that you called "in progress" because I feel that it's lacking a flute melody to be perfect! don't you think so? You can take some inspiration from here: https://youtu.be/S5N2VPGWGZ4 https://youtu.be/erBTbeyJ3Mc Thanks Gab, I was thinking along the same lines but I can't find a sweet tone, also, my legato (i think that's what it's called ) isn't very good to get the smoothness of the flute. I'm frustrated with this one because again, I have something in my head that can't reach my fingers  It may be the weekend before I get something for this 
This post has been edited by Phil66: May 27 2015, 08:07 PM -------------------- SEE MY GMC CERTIFICATE “Success is not obtained overnight. It comes in instalments; you get a little bit today, a little bit tomorrow until the whole package is given out. The day you procrastinate, you lose that day's success.” Israelmore Ayivor |
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Jun 1 2015, 03:20 AM
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Hey Gab!
So I've run into a problem - I generally create a rhythm and then build a melody off of it but in this case I have come up with a melody but have no idea how to create a rhythm behind it  https://soundcloud.com/stortzmusic/melody-idea Any ideas, mate?
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Jun 1 2015, 02:40 PM
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QUOTE (fzalfa @ May 27 2015, 11:38 AM) re this is a quick idea throw..... a small lick, i have record a whole track (7min) but not really clean in term of play, i do not reallt know this style of music, but it speak to me when i look the picture. excuse me for the false notes....... https://soundcloud.com/dizy-laurent/test-happy i return to work on my homework..... Laurent edit: i have listen it back again, and it's crappy...... i suck Laurent I don't agree, it's not crappy. I have the happy feeling of this backing and I think that there are some cool guitar lines in your improvisation. If you would tweak a bit the notes choices and put more attention on expressing elements, this could be a killer solo. It just need to be polished. QUOTE (Chris S. @ May 31 2015, 11:20 PM) Hey Gab! So I've run into a problem - I generally create a rhythm and then build a melody off of it but in this case I have come up with a melody but have no idea how to create a rhythm behind it https://soundcloud.com/stortzmusic/melody-idea Any ideas, mate? wou! I love this phrasing! I play it many times and can't get enough. It's pure magic. I played some random chords over it... G - D - C - Asus2, and I got different feels. I think that this is a very creative approach to compose music. While listening to your tune, the intro of this tune come to my mind: so maybe some synth string atmospheres in the back could work... what do you think? -------------------- My lessons
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Jun 1 2015, 09:10 PM
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Hello Gab,
Ok, I'm not happy with this at all but I've posted because the will be another one coming soon. I've still called it in progress. I found it much harder to get inspiration that I did with the other two. I should have faded it out about a quarter of the way through but I left it just in case you can hear something half decent somewhere in there. I couldn't manage to get anything flute like at all The flute is such a smooth flowing sound and I just don't have the skills. Hopefully you will understand what I was aiming for and advise me, I wanted a lilting happy sound that would be nice to have in hidden speakers when walking through a forest or something similar.https://soundcloud.com/gmcphil-1/paradise-in-progress2 This post has been edited by Phil66: Jun 1 2015, 09:14 PM -------------------- SEE MY GMC CERTIFICATE “Success is not obtained overnight. It comes in instalments; you get a little bit today, a little bit tomorrow until the whole package is given out. The day you procrastinate, you lose that day's success.” Israelmore Ayivor |
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