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Nov 8 2008, 08:36 PM
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Hi all
 Got a new song in progress and thought i would put up what i've done so far As with my other songs, i'm still a bit unsure wether the arrangement is just bad or if it's odd enough to actually work as a song. It's still far from finished though. The section that starts around 03.20 is a placeholder for a solo. Waiting untill the actual song is finished before i start on solos Comments, critique and advice is very welcome 
Test1.mp3 ( 6.38MB )
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Nov 8 2008, 09:22 PM
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I heard this earlier today, and as you know.. I liked it
Very cool song mate
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Nov 8 2008, 09:33 PM
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You should really carry on with this song. If you do so, I will eagerly wait for that solo!!
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Nov 8 2008, 09:41 PM
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Good job Trond, I like the way your guitar sounds
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Nov 8 2008, 10:46 PM
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QUOTE (Praetorian @ Nov 8 2008, 09:09 PM)  Trond... I think it is AWESOME bro! I'm not being fake because we are both on this site. I really mean it...that tune rocked!! \m/ I love the gallop that is about :30 in! Thanks QUOTE (Chokehold @ Nov 8 2008, 09:18 PM) I Think i heard a lick from a simple ryhm there, or similar it was great! bra jobbat Thanks Yea, occasionally i'll make things easy on myself QUOTE (audiopaal @ Nov 8 2008, 09:22 PM) I heard this earlier today, and as you know.. I liked it Very cool song mate Thanks QUOTE (berko @ Nov 8 2008, 09:33 PM) You should really carry on with this song. If you do so, I will eagerly wait for that solo!! I'll post an updated version soon QUOTE (UncleSkillet @ Nov 8 2008, 09:38 PM) Really great idea here. I liked the powerful off beat rhythm and how your riffing was following the drums and bass. Just to give a suggestion which isn't meant to criticize anything. Maybe put your solo more towards the middle of the track to hold the listeners attention and a smooth harmonized sort of small solo at the end to fade the song out on. Thats a really good idea! I'll definetly try to get that worked into the song. QUOTE (Kuba Szafran @ Nov 8 2008, 09:41 PM) Good job Trond, I like the way your guitar sounds .Thanks QUOTE (Marek Rojewski @ Nov 8 2008, 09:44 PM) It sounds great, but what I think is that it won't be easy to add vocals to some of Your songs. They are very interesting thanks to the guitar playing, but such complexity can make lyric/vocal making more difficult. Anyway I am unsure about that as I have very little experience. So the best idea would be to try adding some lyrics/vocals to one of Your song just to check how easy/hard it is. If it will work, than valuable knowledge for the future will be Yours;) QUOTE (Nazgul @ Nov 8 2008, 09:59 PM) That's my opinion, too. Sounds great, but it could be a real challenge to do some vocals on that. Nontheless, very good work and I really liked the drums! Thanks But yes.. i'm aware of the vocal problem. For some reason i dont take vocals into consideration at all when i'm recording. Probably because i have no clue how to do or write vocals/lyrics Looks like I have to convince audiopaal to attempt to sing
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Nov 8 2008, 11:41 PM
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Sounds great Trond, add some vocals and a solo and you got yourself a great song mate.
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Nov 11 2008, 11:48 AM
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Its definitly odd enough to work as a great song !!
Love your work Trond!!
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